stories

[Matt]

evrey body post your own stories here but dont copy other peoples stories. i have my own story id like to post it but its on my laptop ill be able to get it soon so hold your horses and il put my story here. but let me satasfy with my first chapter of a new story im writeing called Dragons breath.

chapter one: the enemy arrives

Ian awoke with fright as he went down the stair a man with a scary metal mask appears Ian calls him metel head he picked Ian up and threw him across the room Ian got up picked his staff but metal head already somehow made enchanted barrier around Ian he couldnt move so metalhead got him put him in a wagon and drove off.

ill continue some of the first chapter later but yall better post some storys

[Maureen]

thats really good ok let me try

once there lived a little bunney named Benny. one day Benny was playing with his big red rubber ball.

Harry, Benneys friend stole Bennys ball while he whasen't looking but Benny soon found out and got very mad at Harry he called him a renegade a traitor because he stole Bennys ball and lied about it.

Harry strted to cry and Then Benny relised that what he had said was very hurtful so he apoligised then Benny and Harry lived Happly every after.

it is a short story for children a lot cornie I know but I'm not such a good writer.

[Matt]

its ok if you cant write good i just like reading story good bad sad or MADDDDDD ether way their still real good i like eating pizza thats my favorite food.

(it kinda rhymes doesnt it)

[Maureen]

so you like reading story where some one is supper angry and then mollifys his or her temper and is not mad eany more and there is a good ending or do u like stories with Death detrail and merder with no happending sortof like the seires of un fortunet events? r those the stors u like ?

[Matt]

chapter one: the enemy arrives

Ian awoke with fright as he went down the stair a man with a scary metal mask appears Ian calls him metel head he picked Ian up and threw him across the room Ian got up picked his staff but metal head already somehow made enchanted barrier around Ian he couldnt move so metalhead got him put him in a wagon and drove off.


here is what happenes next

Ian awoke with his head up against the wall he looked around and saw he was in a dungeon. A man entered the dungeon the man said I will come back soon to save you, but please try to survive! I will said Ian by said the man three days passed and then he appeared again are you ready Asked the man? Yes said Ian here is the key to the jail cells use it well he said and threw the keys to Ian , oh and you might want to wait a patrol is coming. Ian unlocked the door as soon as the patrol passed. When he got out he headed for the woods. He stopped at an unused shack. Ian noticed there was some meat and water inside the shack. He grabbed a mouthful of meat and a cupful of water and ate it all. As Ian was leaving, the strange man appeared at the shack door. Leaving so soon asked the man I am Jason and your Ian said the man.

[Matt]

i like mystery unpridactable sad people who are mad almost any kind

[Matt]

this is a preveiw of a new story im working on:


“Hey Jane wake up” I shook her a bit, “hey that hurt!” she slapped me in the

eye “what do you want?” she said “I want to go for a walk by the river.” “Ok
ill go with you Jason but first ask Marion if we can go out, I will get dressed
by then.”

She yawned. Jason asked Marion if they could go out she said yes.

They went to the river it started to rain and they huddled up in a big log to
keep dry.

Jason and Jane soon noticed five Jew children were in the log with
them.

[Maureen]

thats pretty good :biggrin2:

[gameboy]

this is a preveiw of a new story im working on:


“Hey Jane wake up” I shook her a bit, “hey that hurt!” she slapped me in the

eye “what do you want?” she said “I want to go for a walk by the river.” “Ok
ill go with you Jason but first ask Marion if we can go out, I will get dressed
by then.”

She yawned. Jason asked Marion if they could go out she said yes.

They went to the river it started to rain and they huddled up in a big log to
keep dry.

Jason and Jane soon noticed five Jew children were in the log with
them.
I want more!!what happened 2 Ian?

[Matt]

hey this post was from a long time ago i dont write that one anymore cause it didnt meet my standards.

[gameboy]

hey this post was from a long time ago i dont write that one anymore cause it didnt meet my standards.
Aww